Hey Cameron my names is Niel, I like your free writing it awesome, but you didn't put a capital letter at the beginning of the sentence, also you don't have commas either to take a breather,be the ways whats part five about? It should be a whole story.
Hey Cameron my names is Niel,
ReplyDeleteI like your free writing it awesome, but you didn't put a capital letter at the beginning of the sentence, also you don't have commas either to take a breather,be the ways whats part five about? It should be a whole story.
thanks i will take that in mind
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